Hands r free. .
Bt i feel tied. .
Throat is thirsty. .
Bt d water wont slide . .
Numb r my feet. .
N i skip my heartbeat. .
Lips become dry. .
N eyes begin to cry. .
Yes. .there is sum pain . .
Wich i cnot feel. .
So let me leap out. .
To make it heal. .
Ther isnt any cmfort in reality. .
I cn c my life losing its clarity. .
Hangin in d air. .
counting my few last breaths. .
I knw. .im just few feets away 4m death. .
-Tejas Kudtarkar
this is really nice..very well written
ReplyDeletethanx. Its about a recurring dream i often get. .
ReplyDeleteWas fed up of d dream. .so finaly wrote it dwn. .
Tad depressing. :) But death intrigues!
ReplyDeleteNiiice one, mate.